tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post6502797202649092424..comments2023-04-04T06:40:14.964-07:00Comments on MAN KI BAATEIN: WHEN I MISS YOU(Written in 1985)Rajivhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05867052446850053694noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-31904101277277017702010-12-28T07:34:48.188-08:002010-12-28T07:34:48.188-08:00beautifully expressed!beautifully expressed!अनुपमा पाठकhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09963916203008376590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-61071355741184317842010-12-24T21:32:13.954-08:002010-12-24T21:32:13.954-08:00very nice..
merry christmas..very nice..<br />merry christmas..ManPreet Kaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17999706127484396682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-23256041620782082692010-12-24T20:43:54.591-08:002010-12-24T20:43:54.591-08:00कोमल भावनाओं के सुन्दर अहसास का शब्द चित्र !
-ज्ञा...कोमल भावनाओं के सुन्दर अहसास का शब्द चित्र !<br />-ज्ञानचंद मर्मज्ञज्ञानचंद मर्मज्ञhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06670114041530155187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-244735546309867262010-12-24T17:25:27.342-08:002010-12-24T17:25:27.342-08:00एक बेहतरीन रचना ।
काबिले तारीफ़ शव्द संयोजन ।
बेहत...एक बेहतरीन रचना ।<br />काबिले तारीफ़ शव्द संयोजन ।<br />बेहतरीन अनूठी कल्पना भावाव्यक्ति ।<br />सुन्दर भावाव्यक्ति । साधुवाद ।mukta mandlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157348406429932150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-72203863315650997912010-12-23T02:35:00.371-08:002010-12-23T02:35:00.371-08:00Ranjana to me
वाह....
बहुत बहुत सुन्दर...
कोमल भा...Ranjana to me <br />वाह....<br />बहुत बहुत सुन्दर...<br />कोमल भावों की भावुक अभिव्यक्ति,मन तक पहुँचने में समर्थ हैं...Rajivhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05867052446850053694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-15664990298592443182010-12-23T00:16:20.781-08:002010-12-23T00:16:20.781-08:00wow... very beautiful...
thank you so much for sha...wow... very beautiful...<br />thank you so much for sharing...POOJA...https://www.blogger.com/profile/03449314907714567024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-24518210583743332042010-12-22T03:59:42.665-08:002010-12-22T03:59:42.665-08:00veena srivastava to me
"The waves continue t...veena srivastava to me <br />"The waves continue to come<br />One after another,<br />I stand still between mother and son<br />All silent but with mixed feeling <br />Of what I lost and what I gained."<br /><br />bahut sunder.Rajivhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05867052446850053694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-84665302794277695732010-12-22T02:40:18.377-08:002010-12-22T02:40:18.377-08:00गहरे भावों का संगम है हर शब्द में ....।गहरे भावों का संगम है हर शब्द में ....।सदाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10937633163616873911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-22791126748844774762010-12-22T01:53:27.587-08:002010-12-22T01:53:27.587-08:00aashcharya......kuch aise hi thoughts se main idha...aashcharya......kuch aise hi thoughts se main idhar guzar rahi hun , to yah to apne shabd lageरश्मि प्रभा...https://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2899683472713551503.post-13882786376516986212010-12-22T01:32:23.122-08:002010-12-22T01:32:23.122-08:00कुमार पलाश said...
Dear Rajiv sir
You have writte...कुमार पलाश said... <br />Dear Rajiv sir<br />You have written this poem in 1985 and published it in 2010.. this journey of 25 years .. silent love, the pangs of love, the feel, the emotion, the passion.. all is intact.. truly it is said, the spirit of love never dies.. never fades. rather it gains strengths with the silence.. you poem speaks volume.. more than the words that you have magnificently put togehter... while reading this love poem.. i recall a lot of classical love poems.. and one which engulfed my mind and soul is :<br /><br />"Escape me?<br />Never—<br />Beloved!<br />While I am I, and you are you,<br />So long as the world contains us both,<br />Me the loving and you the loth,<br />While the one eludes, must the other pursue.<br />My life is a fault at last, I fear—<br />It seems too much like a fate, indeed!<br />Though I do my best I shall scarce succeed—<br />But what if I fail of my purpose here? ...."<br /><br />Rajiv sir it is the poem or Robert Browning's famous poem "Life in a love" .. you might have read that... if not do read that... I am just a reader sir so what else can I say.. but yet another magnificent poem... I stared missing your this poem, sir !Rajivhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05867052446850053694noreply@blogger.com